Comic 6 - A Day of Lucy 2-18-10

20th Feb 2010, 11:05 PM
A Day of Lucy 2-18-10
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em11 20th Feb 2010, 11:05 PM edit delete
Orginal: http://em11.deviantart.com/art/A-Day-of-Lucy-2-18-10-154614128
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BlackMageBrad 20th Feb 2010, 11:15 PM edit delete reply
BlackMageBrad
The art is pretty good.

Quick question though; what in the heck is going on?
ArtistXXY 1st Mar 2010, 10:06 PM edit delete reply
ArtistXXY
hm... time for some criticism~!:I (don't worry, it'll help you grow as an artist)
1)shrink your art. it looks better and is more readable.
2)i can say a lot about your proportions... but actually... the color enhances your artwork in such a way i don't DISLIKE your work
3)anyway, i feel the thing you should work on MORE than your artwork is your story. frankly, i don't understand what's going on either.
4) and... you may want to consider using white out(for corrections) or some kind of more professional looking lettering (if you don't know what that is, look it up. *i recommend you type your text or use a rule, for lettering instead of using the professional tools articles may talk about. 'cuz i couldn't find them.)Good luck~! being an artist is hard work, but don't give up!
***sorry for such a long comment***
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